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alone

from 3ww

my mind is empty
I’m looking for no one
running through this highway
without intention to stop.

on their own…
living their lives…
thinking about no one,
and never bother to stop.

felt ignored,
isolated,
i leave the pavement
and live my life.

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6 Responses to “alone”

  1. paisley Says:
    May 1, 2008 at 15:47

    in the end i am all i’ve got.. it took a long time to learn this lesson,, and i feel that this poem is a reminder…..

  2. TC Says:
    May 1, 2008 at 18:37

    This seems so sad and like someone has given up. Defeatest I guess.

  3. pri Says:
    May 1, 2008 at 20:10

    we all are lonely in this walk of life…though often it may not seem so when it comes to others around us…
    but the truth is the one who learns to walk alone is the one who wins!! :)

  4. lucy Says:
    May 1, 2008 at 20:45

    beautiful poem. what is it about loneliness, even with people all around us, we still feel it. I wrote about it too!
    although after more than 10 attempts, my comment wont take on 3 ww.

  5. san Says:
    May 1, 2008 at 21:06

    perfect. being alone only makes you stronger. :)

  6. tumblewords Says:
    May 2, 2008 at 06:32

    Nice work! For sure.

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