alone
May 1, 2008
from 3ww
my mind is empty
I’m looking for no one
running through this highway
without intention to stop.
on their own…
living their lives…
thinking about no one,
and never bother to stop.
felt ignored,
isolated,
i leave the pavement
and live my life.
bitchyangel
May 1, 2008 at 3:47 pm
in the end i am all i’ve got.. it took a long time to learn this lesson,, and i feel that this poem is a reminder…..
May 1, 2008 at 6:37 pm
This seems so sad and like someone has given up. Defeatest I guess.
May 1, 2008 at 8:10 pm
we all are lonely in this walk of life…though often it may not seem so when it comes to others around us…
but the truth is the one who learns to walk alone is the one who wins!!
May 1, 2008 at 8:45 pm
beautiful poem. what is it about loneliness, even with people all around us, we still feel it. I wrote about it too!
although after more than 10 attempts, my comment wont take on 3 ww.
May 1, 2008 at 9:06 pm
perfect. being alone only makes you stronger.
May 2, 2008 at 6:32 am
Nice work! For sure.