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how about…maybe?

another prompt from 3ww with the words cautious, human, maybe

what’s with being human?
cautious of people’s life,
can’t they just mind
their own…
or maybe…
just pretend they
don’t think about the
effects of the carcass
in the grass outside
people’s home…

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8 Responses to “how about…maybe?”

  1. pia Says:
    May 7, 2008 at 18:28

    The ending was a shocker

  3. whypaisley Says:
    May 7, 2008 at 21:07

    i cannot answer that all essential question,,, but i do know i for one am not in any way afraid to tell the nosy bastards to mind their own business!!!!!

  4. TC Says:
    May 7, 2008 at 23:54

    Shocker for an ending.

  5. Daily Panic Says:
    May 8, 2008 at 03:10

    my question is what is the carcuss of?
    if it is an armadillo, or skunk or some other rodent, I am likely to ignore it except for the stench.
    if it is a human corpse- well, I’d not mind my business and dial 911, but hey that’s just me.

  6. Tammy Says:
    May 8, 2008 at 03:20

    It maybe short but it packs a punch!

  7. pieceofpie Says:
    May 10, 2008 at 02:20

    ..it could even be a row of old cars… parts littering everywhere… it made me think… yeah, unhuh

  8. Bone Says:
    May 12, 2008 at 09:18

    I thought the ending was kind of humorous. Not sure if it was intended to be or not.

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