all dried up…

for three word wednesday

would you agree with me?
if i tell you
that im not here to
look after you…
nor to clean up the mess
you’ve been showing everyone?

i want something else…
more providence,perhaps?
so I’ll know when
is the right time to let go.

don’t debate…
you’re not good at it,anyway…
when should we execute
that often used “quits” ?

I’m tired…restless
and there you are
with that smirk,
that awful look,
telling me you hate to go.
that we’re meant to be,
but damn it,
you are sucking
my life dry.

9 Responses to “all dried up…”

  1. Bittersweet poem, but heartfelt, too. Great post.

  2. oh dear..that dont sound good..
    there are plenty other fish in the sea my dear if that one dont work out..
    good luck

  3. It sure happens…nicely written.

  4. Well done! You captured the feeling so well. And I say kick him out!

  5. this recalls to my mind an awesome piece i read earlier today on cordie b’s page… here is a link….

    http://cordieb.wordpress.com/2008/09/17/the-heaven-hell-rollercoaster-ride/

    maybe it will help….

  6. Strong emotion, to be certain. Hits to the core. Thank you…

  7. This piece really has a unique use of language. Very interesting.

  8. how do u do that, how do u put life of ur emotions into words in such a good way. nicely written.

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